Rattle came with both harder and funnier punches in my opinion. Grammer wasted a few line on an opponent who is slightly better versed in battle rap.

Idk. PG didnt use all the space but MCrattle was barely making sense in some parts. Had to go with PG for cleaner writing but could go either way 

this dude is fvc? 

The winner had the basic concept of a basic battle. But, MC had broken multies with a few complete punches. where Proper was lacking in both. 

FV In Fellahs ™

One lacked most of his material. A few jab attempts but nothing impactful. The other had a filled box and better tag lines. My vote is in. 

Uh easy win here one just had the battle verse while the other just rhymes pencil 

Pretty easy vote here loser just needs to work on his text battles a lot more 

Proper - Same thing as your last battle I read. The most basic rhyme scheme you can get, and no punches. My advice to you stays the same.

MCRattle - There was one line in there that I would even consider a punch attempt (Soccer Grandma), but even that fell very flat. A few of your multi's were also broken, "spoiling supper damn ya" for example, that messed up the overall flow/readability of the verse. "theres is no rust or need to cus but i drop the bus whenever FOOLING DUMBER THAN US" this line did not even make sense.

MVGT: MCRattle - MCRattle at least had a bar with a punch attempt in it, filled the box, and attempted having a multi scheme. Both could use the reading of some of the better battlers here and see how they construct their punches, how the consistency lines up throughout the verse. You guys need to take away all the filler and just attack your opponents.