haha honestly i thought Royals opener was hilarious. Both clearly have a lot of potential, but i went with my bar of the battle. 

Lol, ultra Royals verse was funny but not what you'd expect from a battle verse. Other took this by having more content and actually attempting a couple of punchlines. 

Not a very exciting battle. No multies, metas, or punches thrown, just a bunch of shit talking. Try to work on your basic punchlines and multies. even if they are simple. Those little simple punches are very effective.

FV In Fellahs ™ 

Ultra - lmao I definitely had a good laugh at your verse. Had some funny litte insults in there. On the flip side, I'd hit up the forums, get to know some of the other members here and read some of their verses to get an idea of how they are constructed. For example, you could have probably fit another 2 bars in there. That and get an idea of how they use creative setups for their punches. 

fubam - Pretty much same advice that I gave to royal. Hit up the forums, get to know some people and read up on the better verses on the site. Get to know how to set up a punch and put together some original, creative bars. 

Overall - Both of you had the bare minimum of originality and creativeness. Just very simplistic punches. Both verses read smooth for me. I had a bit more laughs with Royals verse but fubam definitely had the most punch attemtps. Close battle for me, but the votes in.

Both entertained and had a couple funny lines. Level of writing and creativity was about the same. But, Royal cut all his lines short and so only had a fraction of the content. So fubam gotta get the win for that one.

This battle goes down to who used the box better. One dude had slightly better multis but that's it, everything else was even. That being said dude barely even filled the box yO