Nice spar here gents, i thought both was very good to be honest, some interesting concepts from both. Proff i wasnt feeling the opener but everything from grave plot onward was crack. Noir similar the opener wasnt hitting for me but from profit over onwards was dope to me. Felt one edged this but dope battle. 1/

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My winner here was more consistant with hitting creative punches, and smooth af wording. Profit was botb easy. Loser could take notes here and learn from his opponent. Opening three lines were you best, but wasnt sharp enough as a whole to take this. Fairs in

Felt profs flips were a little more clever and that made his verse more entertaining to me . Noirs set ups may have been a bit stronger but I'm got prof edging due to creativity.

i went with the guy that had the better punches, multies, consistency and execution than the other.

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Proff - Majority of the verse was hit or miss for me. I liked the opener, but still thought it had much more potential to be real nice with the cracks/caulk/together play, it just needed some polish and rewording. Didn't sound smooth for me. The couple of the bars in the middle just straight fell flat, execution and the punches in general weren't strong enough to keep consistency alive. Then the closer was decent, much like the opener, nice play, needed a bit bet wording for a top tier connection. 

Noir - Much like your opponents opener, liked the concept and the play you put together, was a bit long winded and needed to be worded better to really connect. Profits line was cool, light on the execution, but I liked it, sounded smooth. Closer was decent, would've been a bit stronger of a land if you actually had a secondary title though. 

Overall - Battle was average. I can tell both of you have written before and know how to put throw some multi' schemes together, set up, and punch. It's the fine tuning and wording of your punches that need the work to take it to the next level. One was more consistent from top to bottom for me. 

Also to add to Noir's feedback, if you fixed up your opener and polished the rest of the verse a bit, You could have easily fit another bar in there. 

Good battle. Both had very witty metaphors. I got Proff here because I think he connected with an extra punch whereas I think the closer from Noir just kind of felt a bit reachy and fell flat. Both were about even on flow imo and the witty and fresh metas from both were entertaining, with maybe slight edge to Proff in that category. Can go either way really. Will be checking for more from both. 

DAMN... Never heard of this Noir dude before but some of those punches really hurt they opponent. Very nicely done dude, not to take away from the loser, he had a couple jabs that knocked his opponent around along with some creative rhymes himself. Fairs in gentleman, this was a classic battle here

Really solid battle here. Both had some pretty decent material, and I felt this was relatively even. But, one took this with a more relevant approach to their punches in regard to a conceptual basis. Which to me made them more impactful. 

This was an alright battle from both. Better than I expected tbh. I wasn't a huge fan of Noir's concepts though despite the execution being solid. Proff's execution was a little worse, like with mismatched cadence on rhymes, but he had better concepts. Close the gap was good, and the grave plot line was a HEATER. Fair's in.

Good battle overall both came ready and didn't see anything bad here. So my vote goes the one who imo had the nicer read one had a good intro while the other was decent not bad but also not as good as his opponents and that's pretty much what did it for me 

Both was fire but winner had bars and flow no hate loser was fire too just not enough good bars and flow... no hate..