Ok gents both need to work on the basics here, crafting punchlines and aiming content. In this one i felt one was closer in those elements. 1/

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Both need to work on their pen game. One at least attempted one or two punchlines and had at least 1 multi while the other had a lot of direct insults and single syllable rhymes. 

MCRattle - Definitely got to start from the beginning in learning how to forumulate a bar with a decent scheme, setup and then throw the punch. I would recommend hitting up the forums and checking out some of the more known battles here to see how they do it. On the plus side you were able to put together some very simple multi's and at least attempt to talk shit to your opponent. 

M11 - Whole verse was long drawn with all single rhymes and had some of the same issues with creativity and forumulating punches like MC had. There were times you took a direction and attempted to diss your opponent but everything fell flat. I would take the same advice I said to MC, to check out forums and some of the better battlers on the site and see how they put together their verses. 

Overall - In all honesty, this was a difficult battle to read. In many terms it was fairly close, but I'm going with the guy that at least put together some multis and had better attempts at punches.