Got Rai taking this convincingly. Broken multi aside and some weirdly worded punches at times, he was simply that much more impactful with his verse from start to finish. Thermostat line was your best punch even though the first multi is broken. Dope you really were kinda all over the place with your drop and was sorta stringing random phrases together with little to no impact. Peep some of the better battlers on the site and take notes from how they structure their bars. That may help you some.

TYPO... should read this-broke-bitch

Dope - spelling is the main objective to work on lol. i'm fuckin with you, serously though, No multies, Broken punches, No consistancy of any bars. You seem to have been writting it for an audio verse and decided to drop it as a text battle. Just being honest bro

Rai - You came out strong i really liked the thermostat build up. Punches was good, i even seen a few thrown in metas that matched well with the punches. Over all great verse.

FV In Fellahs

Oof another freestyle, I'd really love to see DopeTrax take his time to write something, a key usually isn't gonna hold up against a writ, that was the case here Rai takes it imo. As always fairs in.

easy win for Rai here that opener was the BOTB for me should have used more lines like those in the tourney man anyways dope you gotta start using multis and also speel your words correctly man. this time around you went a lil jay diamond-ish a few times here and there which wasn't working unless this was a jay diamond themed battle lol.

Not much to say about this one, basically one had an actual verse and one was just rambling about some nonsense. Fair's in.

Multis all over the place. The verse from Rai was full of them and it was pretty tight. Clever rhymes too