GL Jesters Joker.

GL Audible-Rain

Look both of you listen and maybe you shouldn't listen to me because I'm trash too but fuck it if you are than listen this was garbo I'm gonna be straight up text battles are usually won with clever word schemes and punchlines this battle didn't have any rhymes alone wont win battles you need to think of some better shit that'll hurt your opponent fv good luck 

what i felt about rain's whole verse was like it was one big build up to a big punch but the punch never came and the build started feeling a little too stretched out eventually. in short you're almost there but not quite there yet while jester had jabs in certain places but was cyphering mostly.. which rain also did throughout the second half of his verse but imma edge this to rai for better imagery both need to work on multis and structuring their verse for the readers here.

I feel like one had a more approachable scheme in the battle than the other, and the other I felt was more behind in setups with 1 or 2 jabs. None imo had heavy hits but the one with the ancestor scheme won it for me. Both could use a little more improvement.

Well I'm gonna have to go with who was more disrespectful full here, more punches, not much by both tbh keep it up fellas practice makes perfect. Rematch! Don't go out like this Jest!

Thanks for the feedback everyone #alwayslearing#alwaysimproving

I liked the flow and the bars that my winner took here for the win. Loser was dope but had his ups and downs. Salute to both and Merry Christmas guys