Nice spar gents. One was new, filled the box as you should and has the base potential to push on on this site. The other? Was Spectacular. 1/

Feel like this was incredibly one-sided. roman you didn't have much of anything when it comes to what's considered a punchline and kept it relatively simple in terms of your multi usage, whereas remarK had properly built up punches and clean, more complex multi usage. I'd look to your opponent's verse for a few pointers, roman, along with verses from people like Shodan, Manhattan, Sabu, and Seul to name a few. Fair's in.

You're welcome.

this one's going to marK like completed quizzes. roman was just too basic here with rhyming, concepts, and general structure of the verse. marK had much cleaner writing, better structure, and was advanced in all facets. roman, I can see that raw aggression in your verse. It might help to check out some work even from your opponent remarK here or dudes like Cel, Rieper, RULE, to kind of get a better feel for it here on LB.

One sided bout here, fellas. remarK shaking some ring rust off. roman02, read some of the better known battlers battles ... that'll help you gain a better understanding of how to approach battles and construct your bars better. 

100 - Respect Tha Dons vote.

ill come back stronger next time

Roman was unfortunate here. Remark definitely shows an understanding of the battle and how to use it but rust is showing. Roman I would read some verses and work on structuring to build to a punch. 

Remark came stronger, with the clearer punchlines and good wordplay.

roman02 not a bad verse, but contex and content was not just cutting it, needs working on majorly to compete, with the style and structure of Remark.

Please give me feedback if I’m wrong or I’m not comment and voting correctly to the LB standards. Not hate all love 👌🏾🙏🏾

GL to you both

Nice spar here gentlemen I'd like to see Roman attack, more, some clever schemes and wordplay, overall a cool lil battle, winner takes it here with imo a better structure and creativeness. Good job!

Well for obvious reasons that if need explaining i will. But i have to go with remarK. Nice drop FV In fellah -BMG-

Roman your wordplay was extremely basic you need a lot of work. remarK takes this easily The "leg" scheme was dope the "luggage" scheme was dope.