Leaning punisher. Punisher I would recommend building up to a punch rather than the rapid fire way this one was structured. A build up increases the effectiveness of a punchline and makes pacing a lot better. H1Z1 i would make sure you have a concept of what you are about to say in the punch line and then write the setup for it. Sometimes the punches came with a little set up but they were soft. Fairs in

Odd one here. TP: started out stronger and then fell flat on his face. HZ: Started out flat on his face and then ended stronger. Both have lots of work to do in terms of executing their concepts better. Fluidity in lines and from bar to bar was lacking too. I'm leaning towards TP for the win with the better execution. 

difficult battle to vote on, both had their fair share of a few strange bars but i gotta edge this to punisher for being more coherent with his verse and diss here both had some decent multi tho but lacked direction.