after my 3rd time reading. I honestly have to give it to AR. His methods are a little out dated but they have that new kick as well. Kind of reminds me of when Olde-English first came on here. He turned out to be one of LBs best. Determinator was good, but it seemed a bit forced. Added extra caps to words that shouldn't be. I personally hate the caps thing, but. You have to use it for people to understand what is exactly what. But overall, This was a good battle. FV In Fellahs. 

ya Audibles verse is outta dis vpworld, very unique

SupremeKnowledge thanks for the comment, and I declined your crew request because I’m staying SOLO, unless one of my friends I actually know in person or my lil brother joins.

Nice Verse TheDeterminator, good luck as well.

My verse took me a while to write, but I was trying not to force it. So it took deep thought how to structure it, and try to link the concept as a whole.

All love LB community and good luck battling to all who read!!!!!!

AR: You styles a little all over the place. Your "rhymes" seem to have taken the day off lol. Try focusing on the basics. AAAA rhyme schems. Write punchline then backwards from that with said punchlines set up. Then another bar. Start from here and then progress. As it is, you've shit bold, some rhyme some don't. It's a complete mess if i'm being honest with you. Not to worry, you can always improve. TD: Done enough here to take the win. Fairs in, i'm out.

2FUEL can you elaborate on this please> focusing on the basics. AAAA rhyme schems. Write punchline then backwards from that with said punchlines set up. Then another bar. Start from here and then progress< in detail, with a deeper explanation please. So I can have a better understanding.

Thanks for the feedback as well 2FEUL.

audible i respect the imagery you displayed in your verse but you came off as if you were trying way too hard the rhyming structure still need to be regularized as per the site's standards which determinator followed. u had a few ideas which you couldn't frame into a solid punch mostly while determinator had no similar issues with his ideas too they were a little lowerd in terms of lows compared to rain's here and ofcourse, determinator was ahead multi wise too.

The Saaxxx Baba could you please explain, with an example of what you mean by LB standards of regularised.