and just leave ((YOU)) laying above - MY FAULT MISSED THAT.

Similar to the last battle. My loser just isn't implementing the fundamental basics of battle rap(and I don't mean using caps lock.) work on the development of punchlines, with a conceptual basis and build from there. 

Supreme structures and punches were enough on this. M11 i find it a little ironic that in this verse you diss most rappers for having a very limited vocabulary and i don't see anything over a 1 or 2 syllable rhyme here. Slow down think of a punch and then work on delivering it. Don't worry too much about rhyming straight off. A great battler sent me something along the lines "You are letting the rhyming eat up all of your brain, focus on what you are gunna say first (meaning wise) and then work on the rhyme." 

I only try to rap of meaning this fire is too much and this gun slang is Kinda last year so i dont use it anymore. Im trying to get my Bars back ive lost them 4 years ago.

Got SK taking this one because M11 just seemed to be writing his drop more as a cypher and it read quite elementary with a definitive lack of punchline attempts. SK came out a little cleaner and more structured.