lol well the first guys was cute while supreme was smooth almost free credits shit here. BOTB - 

ill make the MORTUARY ROW this "Ted Bundy" don't fight men - he "TORTURES EVERY HOE"//

I've got an obvious winner here. To my loser, I'd suggest reading the battles on the hotlist, to get a better feel for some of the basics of battle rap. Fundamentals like punchlines, rhyme schemes are probably the most important facets of the medium. And once you have those down, you can begin to focus on the more technical aspects such as metaphors, wordplay, and things of that nature. 

This is very similar to the other battle.

I have very similar advice for m11 think of what you are going to say. I.e "He sucks dick" and then write a build up to the punch line. After some practice incorporate some flips and up your syllables.