Yah Not On Mah Level.

 Oath had like one haymaker, but the Determinator had the better bars overall...not to mention the cleaner rhymes...

“BOTH had like one haymaker”***

Tough battle to judge here. Both had some serious flaws, in my opinion. Q, you showed some really weird wording issues here, that affected the impact of your lines to me a considerable bit. For example, what's a "pendulum ball sack?" It's just not something a person would naturally say, and it seems a lot like the phrasing was selected for the sole sake of the rhyme scheme. Not the right move, in my opinion. That aside, to be frank, none of your attempted punchlines really landed for me here, either. Very low quality verse from you, knowing what you're capable of. Determinator, you showed a lot of the same wording issues I remarked on in my last vote in one of your battles. Using words(similar in some regard to Q) just for the same of fleshing out the rhyme. And that really cost you here. A lot of your ideas generally fell flat to me here, as well. I'd strongly suggest focusing on how you're setting up your bars, to better develop your execution of the ideas you want to express. I've got my winner, though, due to(despite it being rather played), having the best executed bar of the battle with the Q tip line. 

This is really weird for me. I know q wrote a more complex verse but the humour and flow of determinators verse was so funny and easy to read. The build up pays off any is humourous. No h8

what do you get mixin "Q & Wack" =Quack, DATs A DUCK!oh lord, that made me laugh hard as hell. but this battle kame down to bar paths and wording. My winner seemed more komfortable in tha box and his punches landed kleaner. my loser had some good ideas that never really turned over. votes in.

Q, opener was your best bar imo, had a better structure to your verse in the knnermultiea and cleaner end rhymes, though some may have sounded unnatural.

TD: you got mad potential, remind me of myself when I first started. Your best pun was the Q tip line, though not sure how played that is as it seems like pretty easy concept to come up with. Closing bar wasn't an actual punch.

Got Q winning slightly with a better overall verse. 

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I got distracted now I'm reading this.

Q's opener line for his verse was short, but fire. Opposed to the responder's opener which was not only a lot longer but just didn't connect & was wack as fuck. Q's overall verse was pretty dope, I love how he rhymed his setups while incorporating multi's to rhyme the actual bars themselves. I felt like the middle of his verse with the 'heal quick' line was sorta filler-like in nature. Regardless, however, I feel like Q takes the W here for having an all out better verse.

TheDeterminator, like I said, had a poor opener. The Determinator's Q-tips bar though was not only easily understandable but fucking FIRE. I really had to mention that yo. Although everything else about his verse was either mediocre or just simple. Props to him though for attempting to format his entire verse and be direct towards his opponent tho as well as the nice bar (even tho I somehow feel like the 'Q-Tips' concept could be played out)

TheDeterminator needs to learn english first, his rap was just all ove rthe place it looked like a 6 year old forigner who has been in america for 3 weeks tried his hand at rapping. whereas q wasnt as far off with his rhymes

Congratz to Q gb.....

@Jesters Jokers it called hip hop slang everyone does it here and if JJ cant understand this basic verse i just did i mean theres something goin on w his brain. I got As in m y english classes by im profficient in it when i switch to it, acedemically idk what he talkin bout. Thanks for da votes yall.