#DieSlow

I have Enfinite taking the win here. Better executed concepts, thought out punchlines and rhyme schemes. Rah Banga, some of your wp don't work and or don't fit the lines they're in. I see what you were going for but you needed more work with them. A wp has to work grammatically each way it is being said/used as well as have something to do with the line itself. Fairs in, i'm out. 

I get what you mean in terms of cataract but other than that I don’t understand. Everything else seems solid asf to me.

Leanin en here. Rah spent some time building to punches that landed but weren't enough to warrant how long it took to get there. Ens got the idea right but could use some time on the grindstone sharpening those skills

Decent battle here. Enfinite kept up with the delivery of punches as well as a few nice metas. Rah, was a bit not understandable such as "I'LL BLACK WITH THAT". FV in fellahs

Thanks for the feedback y’all,I’ll black with that broken down means. (Slang) to black is to go crazy and at the same time you know how black females tap their wigs a lot ... that’s the reference I was hinting at with the gun 

Both have points to work on. Experience garnishes success in this field so keep writing. The vote goes to the one who tried to direct punches toward his opponent better. Try to word your punches better tho