This battle was really good imo. I got Colossal winning with some standout bars with a swagger on em that was just really dope. You have a slick style to your pen, man, and I dig it. Liked the end is Ny bar and I feel that was your best one of the battle. Ny your Costa Rican resorts bar was fire, bro. Was definitely digging that. In terms of an entertainment factor, though? I got Mini slightly edging you here. All in all a great battle. Fair's in.

It's Killers. Dope battle, good luck!

Good luck brother, got finals today, wish me luck haha.

Oh yeah quick expo. People died in Costa Rica from tainted alcohol. Any other questions feel free to ask...or not, it's up to y'all lol

Mini when dropping a 16 its best to complete the box, otherwise it's like 10 bars.  NY - good strong punches, which what i mainly look for. FV in Fellahs

Villy came with the syllable count. But wasn't the best verse as far as set ups connecting to punches. Colossal this honestly had some time connecting lines into any sort of build up. The opening was a little cleaver as far as the user base as a total but it just kinda felt like you wrote a shit load of rhymes and put them in a paragraph and didn't build on concepts or build up to punches. The dilating his pupils could have been paired nicely with a school line but it just was left to hang. So work on how bar 1 relates to bar 2 and you will get there homie.

"Colossal honestly spend some time connecting lines"

Don't know how i butchered that so badly

I really thought I filled the box this time smh, I'm callin it a site glitch

Honestly, this style didn't work for you, Mini. I'm a big proponent of writing like a verse is for a live battle. It's how I always write. But, at the same time, you have to understand that the fundamentals are still important. Structure, set ups, and conventional punches and wordplay. You had some bright ideas sprinkled in, though. The shift too far into "I watch too much URL," though, cost you in this instance. Nyvilly, some of your phrasing here is pretty awkward to me wording wise. Things like "soaked in pee of some sorts" it just comes off as being incredibly unnatural, and not something someone would say. This same sort of phrasing affected some of your punches, too. E.G. minimum waged bar. In addition to that, some of your bars didn't connect on a relevancy level with one another, and I'd like to see you keep the idea throughout the set up, opposed to shifting from one idea to another, such as in the bill/folded money concept and set up. But, overall, I've got one taking this with some better thoughtout concepts which led to a couple harder hitting bars with a more conventional style that worked better here. 

Thanks Rezn, that's great feedback!

One out shined on his opponent here. ColossalMini you have a lot to work on. Keep an eye on those multis, they’re all I’ve rthe place. Also, you concepts need tweaking and better execution. To tha winner, best I’ve seen from you, good stuff. Keep this up. 

Colossal - Liked the opening bar. You have a unique style for sure but I definitely think it will hurt you against any of the decent battlers here because this style seems to have a lot of filler and really not allow you to throw the same consistent punches that a traditional verse here has. 

Ny - Opening bars were decent. I liked the nameplay/concept, however, it could use some polish and rewording. It seemed a bit winded and the joke as im beating your corpse had an extra syllable than the rest of the scheme had. Caught that cause the flow was throw off while I was reading the bar. Next whole sequence from bill line to the cheap hitman all fell flat for me. That either had to be taking out of the verse or really reworded. Tetherball and breaking bad punches were very nice. Connect a strike punch was nice as well. The rest landed as far as punchline goes but I wasn't feeling them a whole lot. 

Overall, this was a cool battle. I thought colossal had a unique approach which ultimately hurt his verse quite a bit in the end. But that opening bar he had I thought was pretty creative and I liked alot. Ny I thought your verse had it's up and downs, but you definitely had some punches in there I really enjoyed and thought it was enough for you to get my vote.