Good luck, brodie.

You got potential for sure, man. Looking forward to that challenge coming from you.

Nice pen bro. Ima keep working and eventually give you a better fight dog. I pulled back a lot on this just to see who would come up with what.

Rah didnt do enough he couldve been more creative added a bit more punches n caps, just honesty.....ughmm rieper got everything he put in there got the multis n caps and nice use of words here. fairs in.

Damn Rah i see you bro, You getting alot better. However, ima keep it on some fair shit. I like both because i can actually read and understand what you guys are saying, it isn't all mixed up with that "_-*&^%@#$%" shit. Guess its the new style... But Rah, your multies are getting a bit better still broken, but improving, punches also improving, i didn't see any metas, but the way it flows was better.... Rieper - You always do your thing bro, i can tell you didn't go as hard as normal, started out strong, slowed down a bit in the middle but you picked back up quick, strong punches, seen 2 metas i liked, over all it was a okay battle. FV In fellahs

Just to throw this out there.... The way people (caps) their multies or "quotes" the punches. should have no effect on how you vote. Any real rapper, battler, reader writer etc... could read a battle and not need CAPS or "quotes" to understand whats what. Seems like to me people don't "actually" read the battles. they just go off of looks... 

Damn the sonogram line was fire. And rah I don't know man I just really enjoy the way you flow. You had good schemes and flow. I just think rieper was a bit more hard hitting in this one. Good ish both y'all 

I got Rieper taking this with a smoother reading drop. The better structure made for an easier read/fluidity from line to line. Rah, don’t put expos in yah lines. IF needed, put them at the end of tha bar or in tha comments, not in the battle. Of it wasn’t live, yah wouldn’t be in tha middle of a rhyme scheme, battling away and then stop an explain each thing you’re on about and then go back to the battling. Yah concepts aren’t bad, just need work on structure and execution of concepts as well as fixing up your multi syllables. 100 - Respect Tha Dons vote. 

Pretty nice battle here, one clearly outshined the other but hes got some potential. Keep progressing

Lock got this one, was just more advanced in practically every facet that can be measured. Rah has potential and has decent concepts but the execution is lacking at this stage and the lines + rhymes came out a bit too basic in comparison to rieper.

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