Good luck Pineapple.

Lol, Rican - You know better fam. Pineapple work on adding some multies and metas, keep posting you'll get there bro

MURDA.

I want to see you against better comp but it was entertaining. Teachers pet bars was DOPE asf . Inbox me I wanna talk business with you fam.

Decent nameplay from Rican. Not his best but easily enough for the W. Pineapple this isn't about rhyming words and saying nigga in every other bar. Think about how one line can connect with the one after it. Something like "He stretch the rhymes till he's blue in the FACE DAMN, stretchin for shit like Jordan in SPACE JAME" Super simple but the first line connects with the second.

Pine was just too basic here to keep up with Rican, who was using more advanced rhyming, metaphors, concepts and punches. Pine's verse was just a bit unrefined but can see the makings there going forward.

Low 4 to low 6. One lacked anything creative. Basically approached with a simple text format common in site rookies. I would recommend following suit with your opponents structure with set ups to compliment your punches while keeping the concepts and punches somewhat unique. The other capitalized in everything I just mentioned. The apple to school, teachers pet was dope. 

PA - Felt like you had no sense of direction or capability to write a thoughtout punch, shit was just everywhere. Clean it up, don't just rhyme shit together & set up a punchline. 

Rican - Light bars but enough, your experience got this for you. Different levels. 

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Pinnapplegotta incorporate wat ur opponent did...capped multis for example n fill da vox completley. Rican didhis thing hete n i like da pinapple flip w da spongebob reference pretty tight. keep pr acticing everyone. fv

kind of a landslide snipe here, one clearly outclasses the other. Pineapple, reference some tournament finals battles to see how to really form a hard hitting bar. fairs in