Murder

Nice little spar here, fellas. I feel ones opener was the BOTB and had enough impact to take the win. Both had their ups and downs in their pieces. Hawttlanta: Opening bar was nice. Following bar was a mis for me. Second two bars i've no idea who the reference(s) are about. Opening bar was solid though, well thought out and nicely executed. Mrs Omnific: Your opener was a nice concept but wasn't executed to it's full effect. The wording of the punchline was poor, like you 'weigh lesser', just dosen't seem right. Second bar scheme was also good except for the fact that Tony Hawk was a Vert skater and not a street skater. So you wouldn't see Tony Hawk grind. You went for long bars in your piece, which are good when doing a 16, 32 or 64 where you've more room to play with. I feel that hurt you in this battle as it's only an 8 line battle so you need to pack it with as many hits as possible. 100 - Respect Tha Dons vote. 

Omnific came out swinging with that opener, other i feel like with some better wording in the first bar it coulda been lethal he also stayed at a similar caliber the entire time. Hawtts opener syllable wise was broken? Or formatted badly. He did pick up from there though and got some good licks in.

MURDA.

MURDA

Hawttlanta, there was some horrible rhyming in a couple of places here. In that the syllable counts didn't match. Which really affected the flow of the verse to a degree. You had some okay, though somewhat bland concepts, too. But, overall a decent, just not great drop. Mrs Omnific this was a bit better than some of the previous work of yours I've seen. But there are some things that need a lot of work. While I appreciate the attempts at wordplay, it's important to make sure that when using wordplay it works grammatically both ways. Otherwise, you lose that second meaning, making it in essence totally null. Mayweather/may weather is also INCREDIBLY played. Keep grinding, though. Giving this to the stronger verse who had a better understanding of structuring and delivering punchlines through their use of the basic fundamentals of battle rap. 

Hawt, so many bits didn't rhyme for me. Maybe you've got a weird accent, but generally speaking tonnes were off. Punches were delivered okay and a primary oart of the verse.

Omnific, maybe a little less punch based on some of your other verses I saw abd the lyricism fell off slightly.

Got Hawt here.

One had a really awkward rhyme scheme, Worded differently and the punches might have hit harder. One was outshining the other, fairs in