STREET TALK your rhyming was nice at the start with the 4-syllable multis, altho switching to a 2-syllable scheme hurt you through the rest of the verse. You had some ideas around punches going, like the Lizzo/truth hurts, but you need to learn how to structure them into a proper punch (there are lots of tutorials in the forums, and you can see how other battlers are doing it, or hit me up if you want direct advice).

Rican this was obviously a snipe so I'm not going to go into detail in the flaws. I thought your 'its a movie' bar was the BOTB because it was the cleanest even though its not exactly a fresh concept. The wording in the Goofy opener seemed a little off to me though.

Relatively close but Rican got this. Street you got some potential you just gotta work on the wording to your punches a little more, imo. Rhyming could also get upped in terms of the syllable count but that's not as important as punchlines, to me. Rican you schemed this and had some decent hits the whole way through. Like the closer the best out of all of them. Fair's in.

Will be back to vote in a lil lil

STREET: You have a good flow but that’s about it right now. You need to incorporate punchlines and metaphors directed at your opponent. Yours seemed more of a cypher. 

Rican: Clean bars overall. Fit a lot of jabs in such a small space w/ the scheme. Spinaroonie bar was nice 

STREET TALK's highlight was his opener and even at the verse's best it still was nothing compared to the responder's. He had solid multi's at the beginning but it got progressively worse and from what I observed he has incorporated zero punchlines into his verse either. 

Rican easily takes this with the solid W for having a fundamental understanding on how to set up a verse that's adequate to battle rap. He used hard-hitting punches that were cleverly setup metaphorically & he also reinforced his bars with some solid multi's that he kept consistent throughout his whole verse.

Tight battle! I'ma have to go with Papi(awkward) on this one. Street talk, you starting off pretty nice you had some nice multies but then kind of fell off at the end. You definitely got the feeling of what a battle should be, props! Picked Rican cause of his smoothness with Concepts and that crazy Chalkzone bar. Peace!