lyricthegreatest your verse wasn't bad at all, but this part of the site is for rap battles, and your verse here was not a battle verse. If you want to drop that kind of content, check out the text cypher section. Otherwise, have a look at the other battlers on the site.

Guts obviously you were sniping here so I won't give much feedback. Your flow was nice and you had a lot of rhyming, basically no punches which is fair enough since you knew you wouldn't need them.

I see desec is back to battling fake profiles.

smh 

Seems as if tha first person copy an pasted this from another site due to the writing/lack of space used from the beginning and end of each of the lines. Nonetheless, the first drop was pretty basic and weak. No really hits made towards opponent. 

Second dude: Opener wasn't bad but also wasn't great. No real punch per se. The following bars were similar. Some slight wording issue with the 'knob uh turn it up' multi set. Concepts were nice but need some more time elaborating concepts and executing them in the best way possible. Nonetheless, certainly done more than enough to take the win here. 

100 Respect Tha Dons vote - Q