Dope Trax your verse didn't really make sense, you had a lot of rhymes but they were all 1-syllable.

Cool Slim C your verse made sense and was directed at bringing down your opponent, which is what got you the win here. Your Egyptian statues line was the best line of the battle and that kind of clever punchline is what you should be aiming for with every line. Also try to avoid rhyming the same word over and over (Trax in this case). I know you were doing it for effect but it really took away from the effectiveness of your scheme.

My loser seemed to not have grasp the concept of how the site works yet. Its a step by step process keep working at it. My winner had nice drop still needs work but great potential. Your caps and quotes need to be emphasized. Your running your sentences and bars all into one jumble fuck. Many won't want to vote on your battles if they can't read it. 

Gonna give it to the person with the most punches. Would like to see you get a lil more creative, that would be great.

I dont know why I wrote that wack shit, i was so drunk and high.