Both verses here were ridden with issues, but santa had clearer multis and had lines that were reminiscent of actual punches, whereas fubam's verse flowed well but lacked structure or punches.

MC yung santa, your best line was your snake in the grass line, it showed that you can deliver a punch. Try to work on your multies being more together, so like "host fighting/ghost writing" instead of breaking them up. Also try for longer multies, 3 should be your bare minimum.

fubam you had a lot of rhyming and a nice flow, but you really need to peep the verses of more experienced battlers on the site to see how we do things round here. Try to have lines that build towards multi-syllabic rhymes a bit like MC yung santa did here, and to have more punchlines (kind of like jokes that attack your opponent).

clear winner here, one felt like he was cyphering mostly while the other was more focused on dissing with better attempts at metaphors with the austin and back to bed lines.