This battle saw humour come up against actual punches and a nice flow, with a clear winner in BURDENS.

MC yung santa your verse cracked me up, I really liked your closer, but there were barely any actual punches, it felt more like a jokes over bars round (which would be fine if it was a jokes over bars round, but you need both battlers to agree on that beforehand). Try to make sure your rhymes actually work (manger/hanger? I don't buy it) and also try to more consistently have 3+ syllable rhymes for every line and keep the rhyming syllables together, it makes it much easier to read and you could get an actual flow going. I thought your "tuck it/bucket" line was your weakest because the rhyming was minimal and there wasn't even a punch; the closer was your funniest line but your opener came the closest of any bar to an actual punch.

BURDENS I could definitely tell you've been working on your audio, your flow here was on point. Your multies were reasonably short but consistent and frequent, really helping your punches roll onto each other in a nice combo. I know you weren't tryna go 100% here with concepts like "loaded in a bar" as the opener, it was a well-executed take but a reasonably played concept. I liked your two closing punches once I understood them but I needed the expos there, I know I'm the worst at this but try to avoid the depth of expo necessary especially in an 8-bar where there are so few punches and first impressions are so important. But really this is nitpicky stuff, this was a solidly executed verse with some nice punches and, as I've said multiple times already, a dope flow.

This wasn't a close battle but it was still highly entertaining to read from both sides, so well done and good luck to both of you!

Nice spar fellas. Santa was actually pretty dope. Kiwi said it best, this was humour vs more traditional bars. Picked my winner. Fair is there. 1/

Yung Santa was kinda funny but I got BURDENS taking this with the better setup punches and more fluid rhyming. Band to your head was your standout line. Santa had some broken multis and nothing that really added up in terms of a punch, imo.

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Nicolas Cage movie - Gone In 60 secs, based off boosting cars. There's a Gray GT that's popular in the movie & there's a scene where they steal a car with a snake inside. 

Santa: Not bad concepts though pretty basic set ups and structure to your bars. Keep at it man. Burdens: I feel your opening was your best bar as it feels like it hit quicker than your closing bar. Good concetps, though the gone in 60's is used a few times. Overall: Burdens done enough to take the win here, gents. Gods vote is in.

Zepplin Gear - Rockers were vest a lot, like them blue jean ones and shit - bulletproof vest. Band on your head - Zepplin hat - hit out for your death. 

quantity wise santa had the upper hand coz he had the higher number of punches but not much on quality coz quite a bit of them were played out concepts while burdens had his fair share of the same too but coz of his better usage of mults and set ups made him have the upperhand on quality for me. (spelling some of the words the way you pronounce them kinda threw me off a few times as a reader tho) also, zeppelin is not heavy metal.

 learn to suck your own dick and you can finally suck at EVERYTHING

^ LOTB lol

 He had a chance till he GAMBLED & LOST, 'An Old Drunk In Public' he just RAMBLED A LOT & SCRAMBLED HIS THOUGHTS so he'll never be 'Loaded In A Bar' cause he can't HANDLE HIS SHOTS!

^ BOTB

Shit, didn't notice the typo on Zeppelin. 

Lol didn't see the typo on heavy either. My bad, my bad. 

Low 6 to med 6. One had a couple funny lines that could've made more impact if they were properly set up. The rest of the verse I wasn't feelin too much. The other had a couple good ideas with better execution. 3/4 of the verse was good compared to his opponents 2/4. Good luck. Went with the better overal verse in consistency with better concepts that were more properly executed. 

MC Yung Santa consistently didn't use multi's, and a lot of the schemes were broken. Some of the set-ups didn't connect to the punchlines (abortion bucket being #1). Despite this, the verse was funny, although none of the elements were on par with BURDENS, who consistently used multi's and had set-ups that connected to the punches. Wordplay was also better on the BURDENS side too.