REBELscummmmmm

pretty easy win for dexter here, much better here from his previous verse the formatting still gives me a headache though but he did more than enough for the win here. water those was a clever play but was not followed up by a good enough punch and left more to e desired while the breakfast was the BOTB closer was lazy tho while C your whole verse needed work bro, hardly any concepts or metaphors in there for me to give you any sort of concrete appreciation for man, do put in more work for your next vese and read up a few good battle here and study the styles before posting another open.

Neither was good here. DXTER seemed to have the idea that he was writing a battle verse though and that took the win for me. Although the formatting is not reader friendly and could cost you votes easily and dropped you from easily winning to almost being on par here.

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