forgot to mention, woodworks is another word for underground. 

easy win sax i feel you could step up in competition and take on some of the really talented mafuckas word up respect 

JJ: You’re kinda getting better but still have an extremely long way to go, keep at it. 

BaBa: Pretty much done enough to take the win. Your word could use work. Try not to focus so much on the multis and rhyming so much and focus on getting those punches out then build. 

J.J you have improved a lot. Honestly the way you write multiple rhymes in a line is similar to the way I write and i like it. But i felt like the entire verse was just talking about the state of things and yourself. You gotta remember the rap battle is about insulting your opponent through wordplay and syllable manipulation. Both of which you showed you can do. You just need to write about your opponent and not the general state of things and yourself. Even self promotion is a wasted bar usually. So toss it over a decent punch almost everytime.

One seemed to be spitballing sort of. Lacked any proper set ups to capitalize on any of his punch attempts. Sort of choppy here and there. Pretty basic verse. Babba had the better set ups and punches but I fell it got choppy at parts like referencing ghosts in back to back lines. Other than that it was solid. Good bout gents. 

DXTER's vote removed due to the poor expo he provided.