Sarah I didn't quite get the style you were going for, but it wasn't effective. You have to have structure and much better rhymes to stand a chance here. Reap, nice response although you could have been a lot more creative with your ideas. Your rhymes were okay (a bit basic) but they got the job done. 

This battle was ah, meh from both sides. First battler: yah wordplay doesn't work, yah new tah this so i get it. Yah need tah have yah wordplay work grammictcally in every way the sentence is being said. Keep grinding. Secdond battler has dah LB structure down & def had tha better bars, yah still have room tah improve in. Keep it -100

sarah had attempts at wordplays which fell flat here but tis good to see her making an attempt in that area. as for the battle it was pretty one sided though, i got hell reepah taking this oe easy for a much better show with much better multis and basics of dissing. the squirt lime was the BOTB for me and funny too LMAO. More lines like that and your opener hell.