pretty self explainatory and one sided here. this is an autowin for hell reepah. gotta fill up the box thoume. 

A bit one sided here. Primarily because of the differences in structure. With Hell's use of the entire box, giving him more overall material to work with. Thoume, first and foremost, your verse read more to me like a track verse, than a "battle verse." And that will likely cost you on the site. I'd advise, even with open battles, prioritizing a sense of directedness at your opponent(even if in a general sense, as in referring to them as you, or them, etc.) And a lot of people will advise that you fill the box(that's less important to me overall, despite it allowing for more material to be used.). Once you're directing your verse at your opponent, I'd suggest beginning to write your bars backward. Coming up with an idea, or an angle, or a concept from which you can begin to build your punchline around. Hell Reepah, you had some moderate understanding of the fundamentals here to me. Examples including the paul walker/dog walk her multi, and the bird/cuckoo bird line. But, I'd like to see you strengthen these types of ideas, and use them more thoroughly throughout your verse as a whole. By coupling strong multi usage, and those punchline set ups, you'll really begin to elevate from there. That said, I've gotta give this to one for having a better understanding of BATTLING fundamentals, despite their opponent having a strong understanding of rap from a musical perspective. 

Thoume's verse was totally a cypher. Hell had some cypher sounding parts but also had some parts that were more battle oriented. Would likento see Thoume work on focusing more direct disses toward his opponent and would like to see Hell use more complexity in his jabs (metaphors, wordplay, etc.) Overall this was a pretty easy call. Fairs.

Thoume did not seem to understand the structure of a battle rap and the format wasted a lot of space in the box. No further expo needed