Nice spar gents. Focus you deffly have good flow and the cadence is easy to follow. You need to work on having more direct content aimed towards your opponent. Papi solid nameplay work here. Fairs in. 1/

Focus had what looked more like a cypher verse than a battle verse, to me. You gotta throw some punchlines if you wanna have any hope of winning a battle, bro. Rhyming left a lot to be desired, as well. Too simplistic, imo. Rican you did more than enough to win by simply throwing some punchlines out there. Closer was your best line. I don't really think I need to give you TOO much feedback here.

Clear cut winner IMO. think focus needs to clean up his style a bit. Reference to and structure and how he sets his punches up to accommodate his punches in theme. Keep the Multies sane syllable as well and think of unique punches to incorporate in your verse. Rican basically had everything mentioned. Really liked the Kama sutra dice. Haven't really heard that before. Good luck to both. 

Relatively easy W for Rican here. I hope you would have posted this against Grizz lol I feel like you let him off the hook easy tbh. But dope drop here Rican, and Focus, keep battling and improving. The more you battle, the more experience you'll gain. Keep working on capping your rhymes, and continue to make them longer so you'll get points for creativity. Since punchline/setups is a learned skill, that'll take time. So for now, rhyming and scheming should be your next goal. 

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very one sided battle here even for a snipe Rico was relentless with the nameplays throughout and the closer was damn !!! thats the kinda hit me saaxxx with !!! focus your ultis had zero relevancy but it was nice that you had them but then even that disappeared later on in your verse almost like you forgot to rhyme or something i dunn but i would suggest you try making your rhymes more relvant and coherent with the overall imagery of your diss. 

Will be back later for happy land to vote someone remind me

The winner here is clear.

Even though I felt like what Focus brought to the table here just wasn't enough, I did like how his verse sort of told a story and he had a sort of theme to it which was really classic and noteworthy of being mentioned. His multi's which was the only somewhat decent thing about his verse was at best mediocre. This opponent has failed to provide any sort of decent punchline here from what I've noticed upon reviewing the verse several times over.

Rican's verse takes the lead under all category. He has incorporated propper punchlines into his verse that was set up properly with cunning metaphors & also had superior multi-syllable rhymes. His opener punchline was pretty cool. Although I felt like his punches were getting proceedignly weaker as they went on, it was still dramatically better than anything his opponent had to offer in this battle. 

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