Nice spar gents. TROY you do have something about you. But you need to add more complexity and punchlines to your drops. Caked a similar feedback, you need to add more punchlines and conceptual bars into your verses. Felt one edged this by being slightly stronger at the basics. Fairs in. 1/

I felt like Killa Troy had the overall more entertaining read imo. Caked wasn't awful, but I see room for improvement somewhere down the line.

Voting for Cakedout because he was more creative and complex in his approach. Killa had some decent ideas but executed them in such a basic way that it diminished the impact and overall strength of his drop.

welcome back cakes, thought you had deleted your profile. nice u still here though. kill the cherry line was used exactly the same way by Rican in one of his tourney battles so i did suggest you try reading up more battles here and even better vote on them too! to avoid using played out concepts in your verse. other than that your verse was ok not too bad but not too good either, some of the wording can be smoothened out a lil tho but you really should try using metaphors and wordplays with longer multis and push ur limits with that. you may be surprised how good you may get in a short period of time! Cakes the closer was prolly your best one other than the pete rocked one but still did hae a lil rusty element to it but you had the more matured verse here and get the win easy

Honestly, i feel like one just made more sense with his bars. One had weird wordplay. Ya'll did what yah do though. Shooting tha' fair one. Eazy!

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Ones flow was super hard to read/follow. I'd recommend and easier structure for the readers while incorporating some set ups to deliver the punches. The other stayed simple but a much easier read and the jabs were there, although light. Just enough to take the W.