Both could make improvements but I felt Q got this with the fresher ideas which lead to better hits. Wording was a bit clunky at times and that needs to be cleaned up, but overall not bad. VA I feel you had the less creative ideas between the two of you here and that cost you, not to mention the pauseworthy opener really hurt you here, imo. 

Nice spar gents. King the chat bubbles my fave from yours. Q the long build to the charles punch was a risk, not sure it was worth it. Closer was nice. Honestly have seen both do much better, felt one edged with better conceptual moments. Fairs in. 1/

I'm a beast

Not what I expected to see, but I have Q taking this because of his better, more creative concepts. King, your schemes are shorter, so they need to have a lot more creativity to them. Rican does a great job with this. Some texters have longer schemes like Rieper, then some are more short schemes like GOOD GRIEF or Rican. But the catch if you have shorter schemes is that you have to, HAVE to be creative. If not, you end up with a verse like yours, which seemed like a string of rhymes that didn't have any clear punchlines or depth, simply rhymes. Good battle.

How Did this Man Grab Blue Flames? Q killed him Easily In every Catagory. Shameful but Still a good Read...

close battle its hard for me to say but i feel one has better set ups and punches and nicer concepts............................................................................................................................................................

Good battle fellassss

King

you really need to be WORKING UP TO ME,  since king beat on new comers like JERKING AH JUVIE, you cant steal a win, i BAIT CROOKS, youll look like a hungry fish getting your FACE HOOKED,

I loled at the juve line and I like the bait and the hook reference. Pretty good bar

but bullets on reserve, they got your FACE BOOKED, I SMASH SCUFFLES, your text heads better be quiet and ACT HUMBLE or have them CATS MUFFLED, cause this their LAST MUMBLE, then my clique on your circle like touching CHAT BUBBLES,

The multis were dope, the last bar I thought was fire. I think it's the BOTB

ok ok, I'll take it gentle, my GLOCK CLEAN, just to make it simple, I GOT BEAMS, infrared in face like pimples and I POP THINGS, this a spade spar if you get an ace card you still can't TOP KING

Nice way of finishing, again good multis the punch was cool. 

Q

I'm invited to a Royal Ball of a “Family affair”, perhaps i may BRING PEARLS AN A NECKLACE CHAIN an since his fams “in'tah breeding” some tennis balls to SLING CURLS W/ MY RECKLESS AIM for their dogs to chase. Listen, “Cuz, in” each room they fucking, SWING GIRLS, W/ the SAME SECOND NAME. Damn, i see now... I'm battling KING CHARLES THE 2ND OF SPAIN//

Fire multis, but I'm unsure what this whole scheme was getting at in terms of a punch. 

Q been a boss since the first CAVEMAN TOOK CHARGE 'clubbing heads' no RAVE FAM, LOOK LARGE i throw 'diligent blows' on mah 'militant flows', oh, yah in tha' streets deeps? Guess that's why yah rattling, must be handling “three strikes”... Look, this BRAVE MAN: SHOOK SARGE//

Club rave was good, great multis again the ending punch it sounds like you're just rapping or it wasnt executed properly

King va this was one of your best verses, good multis good punches  Q you definitely have schemes but I just dont understand the ending execution of them. Flow is fire though  

That's my fair vote  

I Refuse to vote on or for that matter, read a battle where one of tha kontestants is talking about jacking off kids. this ain it.

But lol.. That juvie line was fucked up... No more perv lines for me . 

even though king had a structure more suited for an 8 while Q had one which would go more for a 16 or a 32 from a punch point of view only Q manage to get in a clean complete one with the king charles bar which had all the makings of a good punch imo while king had a few with the juvie (but thats way too played out) and the chat bubbles (which was a little unnaturally worded) it was nothing too fab on an execution or impact level and also prolly he tricked himself into thinkins Q was a newcomer orsomething i dunno but i am goin with Q here.