This was fun. Both had highlights but ones was more often and more impressively written. Fairs in fellas. 1/

Expo: Coffin Dodger is 51 yrs old and humans have 32 teeth

Supposed to read spit ya LETTERS AND SCRIPTS but didn't correct it before posting so my bad . But good luck sub . #getbatted

both had decent-average verses, but i'm gonna vote for the battler w the easier read, harder punches that coincided w personals. 

fv in,,

This was almost to close to call dodger I felt like u had some pretty dope ideas in there but had a little bit of a rhymeing issue at the end of a couple.of.your.barz. subreal decent ideas also but I felt like u was kind of just dissing his age a little to much tbh. All around I'm giving this to the one that made me laugh a few times. Fair is always tossed fellas close battle.

Both clearly know how to formulate a verse. I enjoyed the 4 syllable rhyme scheme that smoothly carried over the opening of coffins. Sub also came with more syllables but i felt like the punches that they were attached to were a little light.

Hollllyyy fuckiinngggg shiittttt. This was the best battle I'VE EVER READ ON LETSBEEF. To put this in Perspective, I've never given out a 10.

Not to say C.D had a bad verse, far from it actually, but Subreal dominated him with the personals, and had longer and better multi's.

Coffin Dodger: Really good work here. Not too much I can say that's bad other than a significant quality decrease after the mid-way of the battle. Multi's were decent, albeit there were a few that didn't really rhyme, your punches were good, but kind of became disconnected at the end of your battle. Good use of double meanings and metaphors.

Rating: Low 7

Subreal: This was the only verse in the year I've been here, that I laughed at every single fucking thing in the verse. Your punchlines were fucking golden , and every set-up matched the punchline. You had the most effective use of wordplay and personals I've seen in a battle, and for that I applaud you. Your multis were solid too.

Rating: Low 10

Botb: Anything from Sub's verse, but I'd say the senior discount was the funniest. For technical execution id say the finisher '32'.

Would love an example of where my multis did not rhyme ...never heard of innner and outter multis I take it ? 

One started off pretty good but mid way through and up entail the end it just seemed flat. Attempts were made though but the punchlines weren't delivering for me as a reader. The queen line, and the pants concept just seemed like basic creativity in my humble opinion. Had one stayed as consistent as he started then this would've been a pretty good verse through and through. Sub kept things pretty basic here, basically using the same scheme or topic from start to finish for the most part basically talking about coffins age. It got played out pretty quickly but at least the punchlines were witty/funny for the most part. Lows were subs gringo writes bar which rhyming right and write is pretty flat. And as I mentioned before, coffins lows were the small jeans sort of reference and the queen reference. Overall I think this was pretty close. I feel if one stayed more consistent he definitely would've had this and the other seemed to come much lighter than he normally does and definitely almost got caught slipping. My vote goes to overall consistency from start to finish so I have sub taking this one by an edge. I won't be surprised to see votes for both sides. Good luck to both. I'll be generous and give out 7's for the 16's. 

Its MUUUUUURDA.

honestly, i was impressed with both rappers, but one carried out better rhymes. You both did good though. You're both winners

DEDSEC!

DedSec. It's a family thing!!

DedSec!!

both were flawless with multis and wording for me here amazing simplicity to their lines and generously lucid reading experience too enjoyed how both verse had that flow which me made your disses even more esp coffin's he got a rare quality when it comes to rhymes honestly and is rarely matched at it like how subreal did here what made the difference for me here were the punchlines, i felt coffin was average there for the most part but his closer was his best one while subreal was above average mostly and really good at some areas as well as in with the bifocals and senior discounts shit (which if coffin really is 50 years old is fucking lethal lol ) else it isn't but overall gringo line was funny too nice battle here i felt one was ahead on punchlines while both were on par with everything else.