MvH

expo

PAUL D'AMOUR is the bassist for tool

Dave Mustaine couldn't hang with metallica

rest is simple

Bnas: Your multi's were basic, your punchlines were more like disses and you had no evidence of set-ups in your verse. Nothing connected, and it seems like you strung a bunch of disses together to make it seem like your verse had some substance. Your double meanings / metaphors made no sense either. For example, how is "falling back" relating to faint timing? Are you trying to say that it's time for him to faint? And if so how is that a supposed to burn your opponen, and the "shit lips" was the worst offender of this. 

Rating: 2.5/10 

You've been here for a long time, you should know better.

Zezmer: Your multi’s we're your biggest flaw here, as you had 2-3 schemes that were broken; most notably the second scheme, where only the ending word rhymed. Your punchlines were not the best either, with your double meanings not being open ended or not connected to a metaphor. The worst part of your verse was the end part, starting with the baddy scheme. None of the things at the end were connected, and seemed more like two separate disses and self-hype rather than set-up and punchline. The golf cart parking / viagra line would have potential if you used more detailed double meanings, and if you used a set-up that related to it

rating: 3.8/4

Pretty decent

good battle

That was a fkn mad battle fv............................................................................................. 

Good  Battle peeps