Cant decide,  was good from.both

flamma's punches were conceptually lackluster but cleanly executed. KingVA was going for more clever bars, but couldn't pull it off well. For example, "putting fire on beef in order to windows" sounds nothing like something that someone would say in a normal conversation - always make sure your setups work both ways. Bad rhyming was prevalent too, like PLATE WITH UZIS / BASEBALL GROUPIES requiring a major stretch, and CLOWN OPPOSITIONS / PORNSTAR AUDITIONS barely rhymes at all. Got flamma winning with his more 'literate' verse although KingVA might have been able to win if he'd put more effort into his drop. Fair's in.

GOD DAMN YO!!! HEATER BATTLE! Both dudes brought some heavy haymakers. Although I think my winners stood out alot more it dosen't take away from the fact I did not know the loser had hands like this.. Battle of the month fellas.. Setting ^^^ high ^^^ standards

felt like ones verse was stronger conceptually and in readability. kingva prolly had the botb w his closer but what really took it is how he elevated gradually thru the verse 

fv in

Expo

Last line read like

** putting fire to beef and order to windows **

Good verse man..

This was I nice lil scuffle from both Battlers, let's dive right into the science.

KingVa-I believe ur opening was ur strongest, I like that you stuck to it for about 6 lines, but I feel as if it could've been smoother and more gangsta w/it which is a style that suits you. Example:You'll BOW IN SUBMISSION as I CLOWN OPPOSITION to show you're on top of bars only in COWGIRL POSITION, but you'll get fucked on screen, while your mother's SCORNED BY THE VISION, of an amateur going hardcore on their back at a PORNSTAR AUDITION! 

Or something like that.

I like the concepts, they just need a lil polish. Your baseball scheme was nice ii would've like to see more drip instead of an explanation.

Example: I'm ah cold-pitcher that hold-triggers at the mound to aim at the PLATE WITH UZIS and the glock ah smoke-giver.

"I'm ah-cold-pitcher, at the mound I hold triggers, aimed at the PLATE WITH UZIS, and a glock that's ah smoke-giver.

Your last line was cool, I'd say that or the porn was my fav of yours.

flamma-

your opener imo was also your best and my fav.

"Crew with the glocks, drew and they shot, yeah i got AGENTS AND DRIVERS that’d a leave em with ‘three holes in the side’ but we ain’t talking PAGES IN BINDERS!!!"

idk why it made me think of that commercial where the dude seems to be missing shots but he's punching holes for the binder lol. Good shit.

You actually have nice setups but I felt your concepts were kinda simple maybe too simple. You worded everything nicely it fits well but just doesn't pack a punch. I really would've liked to see you fill up the box I feel u had room for like 2-3 more lines. there's nothing I would reword for you, I definitely need more creativity and agression from u bro keep it up. We all can be better.

With that said ii'ma give it to KingVA

gg's fellas

Thats because he rhymed it with "scorned by the vision" not "clown opposition." Guys pay attention when you're voting please. Shits annoying