only expo i really need to do is the script line..

in pharmacy jargon, a script is a prescription. a script is also text so.. yea

good battle bro

[New Britain’s take the crown, Solar system, outer Space]

The rest is catchy

Salute bro

This was damn near dead even for me. Only reason ruin took the vote was the broken charles line by illa. Just seemed like too much of a stretch of the syllables

Pirate Kinggggs

Ruin: a nice piece overall. Good concepts and your delivery is nice. Only thing, need to start connecting set ups to the punchlines. As it is, you’re more of a one line puncher. It seems like you’re always building up to a heavy punch that’ll connect all of the lines in the bar and then you come with a one liner who’s only connection to the lines before it are the multis. Nonetheless, a good drop. 

Illa: your first line (opening) has nothing to do with the following, no connection and also the multis are a stretch there. Towers-Charles... the whole wp was creative and would of been seriously dope if you had it working grammatically, as it is, it only works one way. How does his soul assist him in borrowing sick bars? The out his pace worked though. The ending punch of this entire bar wasn’t that strong, imo...  still, creative as fuck though. Your ending bars was noice!! Battlin/Blastin though, few these American folks might pull you up on that one. 

This is a close one to be honest. Both have creative aspects and are thinking out of the box, which is always the way to go. I feel Illa took this by having more connections in his bars, his ending bar took the win. Fairs in, lads. Thanks for the read. 

This was a very good battle.. Ruin your lines was pretty dope... Llaa had some good punches and lines was pretty good overall..  I believe the consistency of ruins punches landed him the win. Most of them was simple yet effective..

Vote ruin

Both were good drops. The only thing that made the decision were the opener and ending. Ruins first set a multies were a bit confusing. I liked the line, but "gettin" and "diffrent" were a stretch. And the "cig" line was hard to get behind. Illaa was ok. But the ending was also pushing it, they're just not hitting as hard as an ending should. 

Ok, ok I'm feelin' both here, both had good punches and multis and both had nice flow so was hard to choose a winner here and had to re-read a few times to choose but I went w/ the 1 I felt had the better execution w/ thier punches

No h8 fv in GB & GL both