CLASSICK #98

CC I feel like you lacked a lot of setups you had some decent ideas but none of your punches really hit.. Revan came pretty clean. Really good flow and easy to follow. It feels like there wasn't s moment where you slipped.. I feel Revan was better in all catrgories

#Classick shit !!!

Ones verse was decent although some of the rhyme scheme was pretty unbalanced and didn't mesh well. Syllables at times didn't match and it took away from a smoother read. Not much stuck out to me. The other verse capitalized on everything the opponent didn't. Good rhyme scheme and set ups followed by more unique/impactful punches. Good luck gents. 

One simply was better here. The loser could work on more concrete creative punches, winner here took this the pocket stomach line was fire botb. Fairs in 100

Revan didn't exactly have the best verse in the galaxy here, but this was a clear snipe so he didn't need to. UnknownCC was generally lacking in structure and could learn something from his opponent here. Fair's in.

CC-

don't know if you keystyled this, or you're trying to master the back hand click style. Anyway the structure is off, but anything can happen with practice. The Mexican line was your best but worded a bit weird. I'd say the way people write here you'll need more stretched out punches and a couple of knock knock jokes thrown in to get some votes. Keep it up though never give up.

Revan-

this was an easy snipe for you. Hope the new comer learns from this, but all is fair in war. Your overall verse was nice, some choppy wording in the opener imho.

example: "i'll have u "Laid out" w/ "Attire on top of you" w/out SLEEPING in the LAUN'DRY!!!"

idk if it's a accent thing or what but imo: "out, with, top, and w/out"  back to back like that, through the flow off an otherwise nice opener. 

I'd say the blade, sweater line was your best.

this is just my shit opinion fellas take it as u wish.

With that said Raven takes this imo

gg's 

One was on a whole diff level. Loser had some decent bars n could improve to b a good battler. Get some set ups n harder punches. Winner was the full package

obvious winner,,, one was extremely choppy and hard to follow, the other one wasnt that great either, but did enough right to win

overall, one was better in all categories

fv's in

That was nice!