Repetition is ur downfall.

Loser was basic 2 syllable rhymes with broken multis. And no set ups. Winner had better verse but could still improve some aspects.

Fv

jazzy a lot of the syllable counts in your multis were not even be-rate-me & hate-me, find-you & be-hind-you ... just to name a few. other than that you were dissing yourself in the first half of your verse lol and flickin yo tip? LMAO !! i feel you have the potential to be much better than this though, also your rhymes got way too basic later on in your verse. Zezmer good stuff man. the 10 syllable second line? you pulled that one off very neatly dude !! the q tip on your nip though ... LMFAO !! that was bad man, but yes on the multi front you did more than enough for the win here and stayed more relevant too.

low 4 for jazzy and high 5s !! for zezmer here

Low to medium 5's. I wasn't feelin either verse to be honest. One took a super basic approach and the jabs/punches were not there and the couple that were, did not make contact well due to unoriginality and not properly being set up. The other basically had the same but a much better attempt at all the above. Good luck to both.