Good battle.. Straw hat some good bars.. Pretty format with the multies yet punches wasn't too creative.. Nemesiz was a bit more unique.. More attempts.. Some didn't land yet others was pretty good 

Vote nemesiz

Damn, I'll vote later but I wanted to say awesome battle both of yall, you both stepped up ya game

Honestly I didnt not get a super great battle out of this. Both had ideas that could have been executed better but i really felt straw held up better until the last couple of lines.

Bane line was, in my opinion the best of the battle. 

Dope stuff from both. felt like Straw hat got some fillers. I loved that batman line but it could have better. NemesiZ got some mad crazy lines. That pH line was bar of the battle I guess. I go with Nem here

Ones verse was much better to read than the other. Light punches IMO tho but the attempts were there. The other started good but around mid way through I just wasn't feeling the scheme and rhyming pattern that he tried to put together. The punch attempts were there but the connection was pretty sloppy. Good luck to both. 

Straw Hat: I did like the concept of your opener, though... how do an Uzi, Macks and your opponent have anything to do with the rules of the road?... Due to the poor/bad execution of your concept, the entire bar is mute. Need more work for it to actually 'work'. Second bar: the bat man ish is played, though i enjoyed the bane aspect... still. Not a hard hitting punch to be honest. Your ending bar was badly worded and read awkwarldy as well as being a poor punch too. Overall: you have signs of potential, need to focus more on harder hitting punches and their connections in the set ups, gaining harder impactful punches. Keep at it. NemesiZ: Ok... opening piece showed signs of promise. Had me thinking, 'oh, here we go'... then you went from HAVING A KIT-KAT to this MATCH IS A MISMATCH.... one, there's no connection between either and two, they don't rhyme. having & match is... that's not even a slant. The wording of your kung fu hustle piece was, awkward at best. The depressed white kid/school shooter was a nice concept but was execited poorly and again awkward woring. Ending bar was poor too and again, wording was bad.. "like how old witches in stores'... what? Overall: conceptually you're going in the right direction but your wording and execution of your concepts are where you need to focus and put in some serious work. Battle outcome: this is a tough one to call as both have serious issues with there pieces. I feel Straw Hat takes this one due to the fact that his bars had better set ups/connections to his punchlines as compared to Nem, who was swinging one liners. Fairs in, i'm out. 

Both pretty solid verses. Both had good punches. Nem had a broken multie or two and the punches weren't as hard hitting. For  this I voted for straw. 

Both verses were similar in terms of rhyming and structure although Straw Hat was slightly ahead in that regard because NemesiZ had weird rhyming like LACKING DA SKILLS CAT / BATTLE PLACED IN LAST (cadence is off). But I think NemesiZ was on a consistently higher level with his punchlines. Fair's in.

Decent drops here. Seen better from both. But felt one had better schemes n punches. Loser just didn't have the same impact. 

Fv guys