Buildin my pen up BEEN DEVELOPIN BARS / you couldn't finish ya sentence ELEMENTARY RETARD/

^^ Zezmer even though this line did not have much punches but it was pretty well worded and a much more matured and creative style of imagery that you should endeavour to carry forward throughout your verse. you kinda fell off it after this line,until the shark berry finn line where you managed to pick it up a little again. Overall, Baron was ahead on most categories esp punches from his opener to the homework excuse bit as well. baron i really think you should incorporate better set ups and wording to your concepts and use them in tourneys coz you wasting them in snipes. The experience is sure to make you a better writer all round win or lose. the closer was nice lol now thats was some Saaxxx Baba shit right there lol 

Thanks for the tip baba. Funnily enough I'm stackin ammo in case im against you in the tourney as we speak lol

Zez I can't get over how broken that opener is.. And how forced the rhyming is.. And then the line to follow up wasn't much better in terms of forced rhyming.. It made none of your punches hit as hard as they could've. Baron got this because of better use of his multies making his verse more enjoyable.. And having harder hitting punches.

One-sided I my eyes. Loser had some decent concepts but better execution n sets ups needed. Winner landed his punches better n hit harder 

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