One was okay,  one was dog shit... broken multis, not rhyming, just rambling nonsense,  pretty pathetic 

Nme.. Aight so the one thing I have to say was really bad.. Was your opener. You were making fun of him being stupid .. But completely butchering your grammar. It would at least make sense if you were forcing it in to rhyme but you needed the words 'Demonstration' and 'Education' then add filler words to the rest, and it would've made for a decent line.  The rest just seemed super simple with no real direction. I felt like you were all over the place all throughout your verse, with your concepts and it really affected the quality. Zezmar your opener was alright lol.. Played out concept to the extreme but I liked the simple scheme and the flow with it. You kinda picked up steam as your verse progressed but lacked a lot in your wording that made the flow sorta choppy at points. Close-ish spar. My vote goes to Zez

Should be 5-5 sorry.

NME was not even close to his best here, the get away line was the highlight but nothing much after that really also the closer did not work coz it's guerilla and not gorilla so that wordplay attempt fell flat too while zezmer surprised me with how good his verse compared to what i have seen from him in the past this time he had bang on multis with a hint of neat metaphors too still need to clean up your lows though once you get consistent at this level then elevate to the next the highlights were the high top and the toe jamming line some of the syllable counts in a few of your multis were off though so keep a watch on that other than that a good battle this improvement wise. i got zezmer just edging this one.