Of course the Topic is Technology so here are my punchlines if you dont get them...

"respect all on me like and insect colony" is directly related with "king" (which really should've been "queen" but I'm a male)

you know how bee hives work

"beef over the web", "reign over this whole lan"

Lan (Local-Area-Network), its basically like a Local webserver. It sound like "land" so you get the idea

"I'm not PLAYIN GAMES on this WEB SERVER"

Games have servers, if you didnt know. Mostly Minecraft and those lame ass RPGs

"all Bite no bark", I'ma let this APPLE WATCH

You know what and Apple Watch is right? so basically the "bark" was supposed to be apart of an apple tree. And, I'm making this bitch watch me pulverize him.

"UPGRADE", "MACINTOSH"

PC's need their upgrades like some of the furry-fags in this website

"Crash at her Place""Windows 5"

The Windows OS loves to crash, like a lil bitch

"trouble'shoot"=trouble shoot, as in fix you (or shoot you)

"Connecting like Wifi", "COMING THROUGH"

Old people like to use "coming through" instead of "connecting" so you get the point

"ADDRESSED MAIL" (as in email) sounds like "a dressed male" (dressed male can be formal for certain occasions)

"Receiving the message" "REQUEST FAILED"

'Error 404: Request Failed' you get the idea

lil

bitch

therefore* on the last line

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Good battle here. My winner started off kinda slow but rally progressed the whole 16 so by the end i was really digging it. Winner has more creative and original shit too imo.  Loser was good but i felt took too long to get to a good punch. Lot of filler. 

Fairs tossed

Uh huh.

Dope battle here guys...winner had some very impressive setups, multis and punches...easy readability, very solid and consistent verse. Opponent, picked up on a tech theme and carried it through his verse, which was very consistent, some ideas clever... structure and readability was lacking, which really hurt your fluidity and diluted the intensity of many of your punches!

Stand-out lines:

You stand beneath my TOES MAN/Beef over the "web", I'm taking reign over this WHOLE LAN (land)

"Netflix and Chill", because your BITCH DON'T MIND/I guess I have to "Crash at her place", sorta like a WINDOWS 5

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The whole site straight Doubts yer a Rappa! Cuz my punches? Feels like a Bout with some Lava! For you? When it 'Comes to Flows, you got None Left' like a Drought in Nevada

Cuz if he keeps talking shit then hes Losing his Eyelids. You got 'Nothing left to Say' like youre Cruisin' in Silence! So now? 'Fire has Lost' without the Use of a Hydrant!

Overall: Dope drops from both, but the winner here was far more consistent structurally and had good setups.

black may seem that he did may not have filled up the box but that was a legit 7 bars though should have put something more towards the end to make it and 8 bar verse instead of lil bitch though LMAO you really are funny man lol Straw Hat nice stuff man you do get extra points definitely for filling up the box more here other than that so that kinda gives you an advantage from the beginning here.

overall this battle was not bad at all i liked how black ran a concept throughout that windows line was the best and had me LMAOin but the rest were something which almost worked and more like set ups instead of end punches also you're syllable count was off her - WEB SERVER & TEXT MURDERER.  As for Straw that american Treaties pretty much bodied the battle alone loved that line and probably the BOTB imo too but the creativity just sky dived from thereon punch wise lol liked the in rhymes in your closer too almost read your expos as part of your verse too lol that was not nice :p nice battle either way you both have potential and promise! i am gonna give this to straw for a more better showing here.

I'm going for the guy with schemes which is black fire. Straw hat was good but I was more entertained with black fire.

Felt like one came to join a cypher and the other came to battle

Both had punches but one aimed at hyping himself up more than battling his opponent

One did a better job of filling the box and therefore won just based off volume of context. Other wasn't bad but lacked that. Fair's in.