GB ....GL dude

Gl , but wtf mean go into more detail bout me biting ???

relax....its just fiction thsts the point of rap battle we dont mean what we say...thats what Math Hoffa says. No dont think u a biter in real life.

to put into context, it wasnt a personal shot...i was trying to connect what a 'scribe ' was....it said "a person whoopies documents"../so i needed something to rhyme w/ DeScribe and Weak Tribe...so something that sort of rhymed and was synonymous w/ "copying scripts" it made sense to say He Bites ...and so "going to details" was a word play for De Scribe (not to scribe) tho i messed that up. So it was just a ficticious attem pt for me to connect the meaning of a word. In a rap battle. Thats it.

Yeah I know it's just words ina battle , but putting in brackets ( I won't go into details ) just makes people think you actually have proof or summat for real ...anyway good battle 

Pretty close. I feel one was more consistent in his rhyme scheme, although it was sort of a basic approach, but the set ups were better than the ending punchlines. I feel the other had both the set up with more appropriate punches at the end made better contact IMO. Just preferred one over the other. GL to both. 

Yeah I dropped this as an open 16 so I could hardly do personals lol 

Dope drops and satisfactory verses from both: this was a lot closer in some aspects, than I had initially assumed...had to review both verses a couple of times. Despite the repetition in his verse, I'm going with Coffin and not by much...also, considering this was an open post (general bars). Multis (internal and external) were good, bars were humorous and insulting...few punches stood out (jabs more or less), but dope WP and interchangeability in many areas, which likely explains your repetitive angles here...a couple of typos in some areas as well.

Psyko...good multis, you had some very ambitious WP and name flips, some of your setups and builds were looking exceedingly promising...angles that I've not seen used, besides (coffin/coughing)...which this approach is way overused in some instances...the scribe bit, was creative...but the WP seemed a bit forced, and didn't flow seamlessly. I understand what you were trying to do...just wasn't the most appropriate words selected in order to do it. I also didn't think it was the best idea to incorporate an expo mid-verse...all and all, conceptually your verse had some awesome ideas...work on your execution. The (coffin/body bag) bit was 🔥.

Overall: this was a difficult one to review, although both of you had clever ideas...im going with Coffin edging, for being more consistent, having better wording and interchangeability.

Fairs in gents 👍

i never realized using bracets (word) was an automatic expo....now i get why this was misconcieved in a way i didnt want it to....o k

Coffin's opener was enough to take the win. Conceptually it was the strongest piece in this entire battle. 

Coffin Dodger: Pretty basic punches. Seems you focused more on the multi sets than the punches themselves. Still, done enough to take the win imo. 

PsykoSwordz: not bad... need to bring your lines closer togehter. far to much filler between each multi set. Need more work on executing and delivering your concepts. 

fairs in, i'm out. 

Dope battle fellas. Both had some good content here. But someone's gotta win. My choice was made based on complexity and impact. Felt one just connected better wit punches. Loser had a good verse don't get me wrong. Just didn't see enough for the win.

Fv!!