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Bnas's verse reminds me of an experienced hoodlum freestyling on the block. I mean, I wouldn't necessarily say any of it met battle rap text standards, especially as far as legitimate punchlines goes, but it was cool still. Although what I just don't like about it is how much more it reminds me of a cypher. Your verse seriously lackluster of jabs. This is what ultimately hurted your chances of winning right here Bnas. The only thing you got on your opponent is your superior formatting and really decent multi's that could've been used in a more directive-manner rather then just simply 'flexing'

DifferentChild's verse was formatted even worse the way everything was set up, no punctuation or anything. Lacked any imagery. Bnas's verse would've made a better cypher verse even. But I'm giving it to DC because he directed his shit at his opponent more which I feel like what battles are really battle instead of just constant bragging. Overall both of these emcees were mediocre and nothing special took place here as there wasn't even a single punchline from what I could tell.

SMAAAACK

man how many mafuckas are in the back hand clique? i want to vote but it wont let me on so many, i feel that the leaders should tighten the crews potency by reducing the members to the loyal and skilled....

SMAAACK

Bnas' verse was ok by Bnas standards, DifferentChild had a near-total lack of non-trivial content so I guess Bnas gets this with higher level content and structure. Fair's in.

This is a lesson everyone will soon learn. If bnas agrees to battle u.. u will lose lmao. I got bnas taking this wit the rifle from a mile away head shot. Diff u gotta step yuh game up hmu if u need advice cuhhz.

Fv

Pretty much one sided here. My winner had better creativity, but there were areas that the punch falls flat. The rhyme scheme doesn't connect to the set up, instead it was just filler. Anyways, as for my loser. He should take a look at the tutorials on this site. It'll help gain a better grasp of how to set up punchlines properly. Wordplay/creativity means alot around here. Just some advice...FV

Bnas has much better verses and lyrics than these, but, he still aint caldwell pope ass-if u know what I mean,differentchild took this

fv in

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