One-sided. Fire Mun you bars didn't really much in terms of readability or flow and you lacked as well in terms of punchlines, giving yourself almost no chance to win here. Rican went light, imo, but did more than enough to win. Closer was all he needed. Fair is in.

*Re' Chun you see how I steal your identity lol much love brotberman

fire seemed like he tried a lot of things and tried to fit in too many thing into one line which impacted his wording and overall creativity negatively while Rican got this one easy by being more simple to the point, coherent with much cleaner metaphors esp the BOTB - 

If you a foe? 'beams on you' quicker than flying SAUCER ABDUCTIONS!

First dude needs help with wp. Those wp's were far beyond your palms reach like jupiter. When dah wp don't work, the lines/concepts of those lines don't work either. I applaud tha attempt at tha creativity, yah thinking tha right way but ya need to sort that out. Punchlines didn't 'hit' or hold any weight either. This ain't fam, just tryn'a help yah elevate yah game. Second dude done what was needed to take the win. Few slight wording issues in parts that didn't make the readability smooth, nontheless concepts were executed and delivered nicely. Respect tha vote - 100

fire mun i couldnt understand what u were saying likes it a different form of english no hate, just what i got from trying to read ya verse especially the first line was weird but i see where u were going kep working on it. Rican good solid verse here the "fire kindle" bar was ma d awesome bro. keep elevating dudes. fv.

its Muuuuurda.