probably my best

-ty

ill post the meanings of the harder vocabs

abnegation:rejecting something

aberration (wheres the ark players):a departure from what is normal, usual, or expected, typically one that is unwelcome.

adumbrate:foreshadow or symbolize.

apocryphal:of doubtful authenticity, although widely circulated as being true.

beguile:has to do with sly

you’re all “spitting in the air” like when “king cobra gets aGGRESSIVE W/RAGE”

^ it is shit like this that separated the two.i would say it was a valid attempt from tyrone but the skill gap between him and his opponent here was just way too much from multis to metaphors and wordplays. also tyrone appreciate the efoort you're trying to put in i did say you talk to Rican a little before posting your spits that should help but this was not your best work till date at all.

tyrone please listen homie u gotta cap your rhyming words only dont cap just anything try reading some verses and see how other people structure thier rhymes, nemesis got the win for me but was a hard read with its complexities could have had harder punches that all rhyme with multies... fv

plus peeps aint gona respect your vocab bro if they cant understand the meaning, i tried heaps with my vocab and bombed out bad, try simplifying it and progessivly adding in hard vocab when u got ya structure down pat.

Nem, that opener was slick.. rhyme schemes were solid. Good read. Ty is a biter for obvious reasons. 

Not gonna drop a detailed expo, but fair ones in.