you guys need to cap your end rhymes or make some sort of effort to tell the reader where your lines are beginning and ending atleast with punctuations if possible this shit gave me a headache !!

as for the battle nothing too creative from both ends other than decent vocab and wording no real punchlines in there. so imma just go with the one that made fewer errors and that was karolina coz BKC tried doing things with his lines like the air lines bit that felt so flat it was bad. i did say both of you read up on a few battles and try incorporating better concepts into your lines

karolina, not bad to start off. It can be pretty difficult to pick up rhymes when they are all just into this Letsbeef style battle box which is why we tend to capitalize our rhyming words. It just makes everything that little bit more legible. I won't be too critical starting off but keeping battling and read some other verses.

BKC, wtf I literally just read a battle from you with capped rhymes and shit and now this? Urgh this is gonna be a hard battle. Really, exact same stuff I said to karolina.

Ridiculously close battle because basically it could have been written by one person it was so lose. Ehhh. I don't know. karolina?