Yooooooooo

I'm always gonna judge ya bars hard & fair Ii expect the same back.We arent gonna get better with a bunch of dick riding yes men! with that being said:

i feel as if the loser wasted time bragging. Those lines couldve been more punches. you def know what youre doing though.

 idk if he saw ur drop and played off it or.. ya'll have a similar style. Either way his delivery was a bit more polished and the set ups more climatic.

i wish yall both the best, and like i said ima judge hella snobby so don't read too much into the low numbers!

i think danny had the fundamentals down, the yahtzee line was not bad...nice use of multis and punchlines to saythe least, Ginge even though also used caps n multis , it was difficult to read for me wasnt dissing his opponent in a barz way n the wording was wonky for me. fairs in...

Ginge had a dope verse, fellas! Good luck!

I gave high Mark's for both here. Danny had a fundamentally nice verse with some good punches. Ginge was less consistent and had more misses for sure. Going with the controversial vote here as I actually laughed out loud at one if ginges bars and I never do that. Salut motherfucker. 

Regular legs.

Tanners use of theme and interesting ways of incorporating it topped this for me. Fairs in gentlemen

Both came and done their thing. Feel Tanner had the better structured piece as well as the more thought out bars with concepts that were delivered better than Ginge. 

Fairs in, I’m out. 

#SCHEMERS

Ging: your rhyme scheme is coming but work on bars and diss. 

OPEN: pathetic chode" killed me lol 4/10 savage af

MULTI: 3/10 smallest externals were 3syl to 5syl and we aite but trying AIDS FOR CERT.. GET DOWN YA CLINIC was way too far out of range, edit for clean flows

PUNCH&DISS: .5/10  bars, where dey at.. and you come off rapey with those jokes js

CLOSER:-1/10 corniness alone will get u this L 

Dan T: lacked nameplay, directs, flips (assuming it wasnt a blind challnge).. your rhyming was also your strong point

OPEN :roll dice w/ others work/yahtzee" really enjoyed the con but executed basic 5/10

MULTI: 4/10 externals were solid but "arms/bars" was the only internal anywhere and ROUNDS was a laughably unnecessary caps 

PUNCH/DISS: 4/10 too much flexing fs

CLOSE: 4/10 I think you're confused my a zombie chasing you and someone who chases zo.bies for js

Hate it or love it text better 

Ginge needs to focus more on directing his bars at his opponent. This is a text battle and you only get a certain amount of lines so you have to make every line count. Self Hype in a text battle just really doesnt sit well in the overall scheme of things when you have a limited amount of material to impress the voters. It will also be beneficial to have lines become connected for a more impactful punch.

Danny did more in the department of directing more thought out punches to his opponent. A few of the concepts however did not really hold value because some of them were kind of forced and it kind of leaves the reader scratching his head looking for the comparison. Nonetheless a pretty onesided battle over all. 1/