Umm expos

Streak known to stink and I made with soap wash up bars and deodorant (thee older rant )

Adolescent was a wordplay so I said teens want smoke like getting yet I'm throwing minors high over fences

Then it's the Manuel wordplay as in drivers manuel man you I'll

And legit that last bar was fire bro... The foreshadow and premonition shit was tight

Alright there's typos in my Expo.. autocorrect is real

Legit, wtf is a lynquist and a manichean? Anyways, you had some decent vocab in here and words flowed into each other well. This is a good asset to put into your verse to give it a little bit of character, but I reckon you should try and keep it simple, get some cleaner rhyming and the concept of punchlines down first.

King, seemed like a little bit of a rushed verse here but as always you have at least flashes of all of the important elements.

king v for the punchlines and set ups that is all, both good .....rematch.

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Lmfao manican for people who cant spell...or look it up ? do I need to explain how bad I bodied this fool.... yall dumb as fuck if you cant decipher bars. Lyricist is a Lynquist hella word play read again and stop hate voting fam. Yall to simple to play with a mind sp complex