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Last bar. Ray Charlie's only received his payments in Ones so he can count without sight

Trying to get this shit kicking

Nitequll's opener was one of the worst wordplays I have seen in a while but after that he at least had some creativity, which Willard of Oz was lacking despite his superior flow. Fair's in.

Umm close battle .. Oz had more multies yet the ending had repetitive words.. I thought it was too much.. Nite quill had a couple of concepts I liked.. Some I didnt.. I don't know what a RIC is..

Close battle

Vote nitequill

Bump for legit votes

Nite, this wasbn't too bad and you had the basic concept of battling down. Specifically in the first half, you have too many words between each multi. You fixed this half way through with the blast the piece - smashed in 3s internal multi. If you're gonna be wordy between the rhymes, you need more of these internals.

Willard, I thought the last line was interesting as it was something a little different. However you've got a couple of fundemantal things to nail down so I don't know if I'd be trying to think outside the box just yet but I defo like where your heads at. This verse had a lot less punches than your other one I just checked. Flow was really good but you really lacked in firepower.

This is really close. Nitequll had some punchline attempts but I'm not sure any landed. Willard didn't have too much in punches, but his flow was great. Really close but I'm gonna edge Nite.

Also Willard, posting "bump" doesn't do anything at all on LB.