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This is extremely close. Both have an idea of multiple syllable rhyming, but both sort of force it out and bit and Uni isn't capping the right words. I think Uni had an idea of punches and while nothing was executed, that little attempt adds another layer to take the battle for me.

Universal- punches didnt hit the greatest, there were a couple of good punches. Smooth read. Not bad. 

Bobbybong- man, I think you're having a problem with setting up. And the punches weren't the greatest either. I think you're too focused on rhyming. Slow it down son. And I think you find alot of improvement. 

Bobby won this cuz he shot back good. 😂 dis y I rarely start battles. And btw believe it or not, NF's got an account on this platform. 

No kidding.

Yeah, don't believe me 😒.

"compared 2me ur styles weak im WATCHIN YA SINK I cant read ur shit its unclear like ya BLOTCHIN DA INK" ...yeah that was a pretty accurate description of Un1verseAll's drop. There was clearly thought behind it, but the concepts were badly structured and the rhyming was even worse. You seem to have potential, but you really need to add focus to your writing style. Bobby's verse was kind of similar in that regard but I was at least able to follow what he was saying. Fair's in.