This is a pretty one sided battle here’s Tyrone, keep at it. Try reading the battles of Jimmy Hoffa, RULE and myself to see how to set up and construct your bars. 

Bobby... stop-with-the-unesseceary -‘s, aiight? You can simple put ITHCY DICK then BITCH BE SICK... we know how to count syllables. 

Bobby with the win. Fairs in, I’m out .

this one was a much better showing from bobby while tyrone repeated the same mistakes he did in his last verse. i suggest you try connecting with booby here coz he had the exact same issues as you too tyrone prolly you both may be of good help to each other. bobby i saw lots of attempts at concepts here from your end which was nice not quite completely there yet but on the right direction certainly man !!

BOTB - 

2scared 2 fight so u quit whenever i spit, 'TRUTH-STRAIGHT FROM THA MIC' make it simple, 'FOR THIS CUNT' remember never go full retard, 'FORREST GUMP' i dont care if u can, 'RUN FAST PUNK' all u gon hear is my shotgun dump, 'ONE LAST PUMP'...

fuel thats bobby's way of keeping a count of the syllables himself he has always been writing like that and i didn't wanna disturb it coz i knew it was his way of forcing himself to write multis the right way

Tyrone, not too much to say as this is a very early drop into your LB run I expect. You have no bad habits which is solid. Keep reading battles and picking up the ropes.

Bobby, couple of times the rhyming was forced out so try and make sure you get completely comfortable with that part before moving forward. You've got an idea of how multis work which is good so focus on getting that a little bit more fluid. Wasn't too much in the way of punches but I expect you'll be picking up that aspect fast based on what you've learned already.

Bobby wins this by having that little bit more experience in what is required.