Well for starters both of your vocabulary skills were feasible but that's not even what I'm looking at here. You both get a five in that category.

Zezmer clearly has this battle as he actually made solid attempts at punches which were just very poorly setup. But if you were to set them up differently with actualy rhyme schmes it all would've been very good. Your potential here is axiomatic.

Black boy over here should take note from his opponent. His lines were literal lines stretched out to hell with simple rhymes and the only other thing I can see is that he made an attempt to jab at his opponent but no punch. Failed to format his verse in any sort of way appropriate to battle rap and therefore did not earn himself any sort of plause from me. 

*schemes

I just thought MIb Black Boy had a better rap. Zezmer still good. But then I'm still new to all this and learning so much my self:) well done and good luck!

close battle both coming with punchlines, both simmilar multi skill ,i think Zezmer started with the better punchline, black boy started coming on strong with the 15 in his chest line and ended with another good line high speed chase, but im giving it to zezmer because he ended his with a punchline but even tho i think yours was more creative and hit a little harder im going with zezmers last line only because the set up to the punch was better, close battle